Diana in dreamself (DIANA'S STORY UP) ~ by AngelBlackwing

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though, I wish I had a little more knowledge to go on and didn;t have to infer quite as much. but again, thats a product of it being RP - you and your friend already knew all that stuff the characters are talking about

10 years ago

Belnika

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ok, I read it finally =3 It's really cute. I especially like how she says "Oh crumbs" - super endearing. i found it a little hard to read in the rp dialogue format though. and some of astor's actions didn't make sense to me. but, that's because it was an RP I think. i have a feeling most poeple would say the same thing about mine and my friend's characters' actions from time to time. anyway, i found the hints about their world in the conversation very intriguing (continued)

10 years ago

AngelBlackwing

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research of Diana's father. Astor's father was also experimented on, but it didn't go quite as well... But anyway, it is pretty much Professor Riverfall's fault. He's the cause of many a heartache and tragedy in this story, actually. You'll read more about him in Seph's story bit. I'm so glad you like it~ I'll post more as I find it ^^

10 years ago

AngelBlackwing

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I have a piece I wrote on my own to tell Seph's story, which also tells a little bit of Di's as well, I'll put that up too ^^ I'm working on the piece that will explain how Diana ended up in her wheelchair as well, told through a fairytale she wrote (and illustrated of course ^^) as part of her coping mechanism. Astor and Leyandris have their own stories as well, but I don't know quite as much about them, unfortunately ^^; The experiment on Astor was conducted by people going by the (cont)

10 years ago

AngelBlackwing

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Haha, I'm so glad you like it, cosmic~! <3 ^^ I actually wrote this with Astor's creator (he wrote all of Astor's parts) sort of RP style. I will be sure to tell him that you like it as well~ They are adorable, I love them to pieces <3 It's really hard to write Diana's 'snarky' moments cos she's a lot nicer than Seph (A LOT), so I had to make her moments more...subtle, without changing her sweet personality. I'm glad I succeeded there XD I will be posting more as soon as I find it XD (cont)

10 years ago

cosmicrose

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& how Astor & Leyandris came to be the infuriating catboy & the fairy. xDD It's intriguing that Astor's cat-like qualities are the result of a successful experiment (I can only imagine what the unsuccessful was like, >_>). Was it an experiment that Diana's father or Astor's father conducted? & I'm curious to know about their parents!! Lol, I'm somewhat going off on a tangent. xD Either way, I CAN'T WAIT to read more!! :DD <3

10 years ago

cosmicrose

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;3; Oh my gosh, those two are absolutely adorable & I am IN LOVE on the first chapter alone!! ;3; SO CUTE!! You write very well!! Your sentence structure is very solid & everything flows so nicely together!! I really love the dialogue between Diana & Astor as well!! They are both deeply compassionate but still hella snarky when they need to be & I love it!! ;3; I am very interested in hearing more of their story!! I really want to know how Diana became confined to a wheelchair, Seph with wings,

10 years ago

AngelBlackwing

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Thank you ^^ This is my favourite outfit of hers, I think <3 I just put this in your check it out contest for the story, not realising you had already commented on the doll, oops XD

10 years ago

Belnika

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this is so adorable!!

10 years ago

AngelBlackwing

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It is definitely not finished and more is coming as soon as I can find the bits and pieces and I will continue putting up things as it's written as well ^^ This doll is for any comments on that story, which is right at the top of my stories on my account, but you can also comment on the doll, if you wish. Note: This was made on the dreamself site, I think it is dreamself.me.

10 years ago