"Sleep tight Alinna, there's nothing will put me to the other side of the trench." ~ by LadyLeaf

White_Queen94

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I agree with everything the others have said <3

8 years ago

2BlueWizards

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Yes, I also meant to mention something to the effect of what Sorachan said. I feel so lucky to be a part of this story and I can't describe how excited I am to see it continue!! I'm going to try and dial back my insane influx of Sara dolls but just know that it is a high compliment from me when I am this obsessed with something ;)

8 years ago

The_Nameless

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This has been such a wonderful story, start to finish! Both your writing and your dolls have been so immaculate the entire way through. I've enjoyed reading along, and I was happy to see Sidera play a part in it!

8 years ago

Sorachan

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Fantastic work, Leaf!! Your storytelling is so lively and intricate! ^^ The doll itself is immaculate! I adore the depth of all the characters and again I'm awed by your technique for making Madame La'Chandour transparent! I've had so much fun being a part of your world of the Twilight Realm and will continue to in the next year. ^^ Thank you for letting us play in your fantastic Realm!

8 years ago

White_Queen94

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Also oh my gosh poor Joel what a bad experience he had with his ex :(

8 years ago

White_Queen94

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Of course the little devil on his shoulder was me!! And I wasn't whispering but shouting like Shia Labeouf "JUST DO IT" meme!

8 years ago

2BlueWizards

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Oops, looks like I didn't miss much after all. But that last bit is just great! Joel and Alinna forever!! XD

8 years ago

2BlueWizards

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I'll comment again once I've read the whole thing; so far this story is quite exciting :)

8 years ago

LadyLeaf

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Joel bent down, he soothed several wisps of black hair away from Alinna's forehead. He watched her, so serene, so vulnerable, so...beautiful. The little devil on his shoulder whispered in his left ear, "Do it." While that little Angel said to his right, "Don't you dare!" Oh, screw it. Joel flicked that imaginary white bug off his shoulder. He stolen a gentle kiss on her ivory forehead, "Sleep tight Alinna, there's nothing can put me to the other side of the trench."

8 years ago

2BlueWizards

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I love this story! I was wondering what would happen when Alinna got back to the Sanctuary; so much is going on and I can't wait to hear what happens next! Joel and Alinna were great, of course :D

8 years ago

LadyLeaf

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He met many friends, also enemies, and made himself a semi-celebrity around. But truth be told and he told no one, what that letter really said, was that he will find clues to his missing mother and sister. But it matters not, they have been absent in his life for ten years, a bit longer wouldn't hurt.

8 years ago

LadyLeaf

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Joel went back, got caught, three questions asked, then released. Then he went back, went through the same process again, and again, until the seventh time. This time, she decided it was wise to keep him around. She said, "Since you like this place so much, Mr. Haddson, why don't you stay...forever! Plus, you have known too much to walk away freely." That was not the numerous dumb decisions he had made, but the only one he did not regret.

8 years ago