Dreamless ~ Prologue - Page 1 ~ by AngelBlackwing

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Sheba looks as cool as I remember her and Seralin just as lovely. The map, of course, is just brilliant. It's so cleverly done, really. I'm marveling at the intelligent use of the background options to make the water, and I really love the sea serpent that appears to be trying to overrun that adorable little ship. I like this story, while I'm here, I might as well say so. I don't remember if I have before.

10 years ago

almondcat

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This is SO COOL! Except... wait... she's holding her hair which turns into her tears? But then it.... actually is her hair... ok.... ima stop talking now...

12 years ago

almondcat

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This is SO COOL! Except... wait... she's holding her hair which turns into her tears? But then it.... actually is her hair... ok.... ima stop talking now...

12 years ago

~Zennia~

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very nicely written! I'm happy you put Sheba to good use :)

12 years ago

Rowena

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Well written!

12 years ago

XxYoutubeGirlxX

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This......Is......Awsome!!!!

12 years ago

OpalBaratheon

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That sounds nice

12 years ago

AngelBlackwing

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Sheba's design, I hope that's okay and that you like it. I thought she was perfect for this story. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE give opinions, I really struggle with prologues, so any feedback is much appreciated (please keep it constructive though =])

12 years ago