Thanks Everyone!! @ Belnika, completely agree that hand turned out to be too long and does look a bit awkward. Hopefully, in the future I'll be able to watch out for it and the angle. As for the swing seat...it is one of those annoying things that I could have fixed easily but I only noticed it after I closed the doll maker. LOL I'm always closing the makers and then finding things to fix. Thanks for the very helpful and thoughtful comment.:)
the repo is really impressive just for being a repo, but here are my thoughts on it. the edited forearm is too long proportionally. to remedy this, the eblow needs to be closer to rope of the swing and her uper arm aangled out from her body more, or the rope needs to be closer to her in general. her legs look great, but the seat of the swing should be further down, more under her. as it is, she looks like she's slipping off. i would position the seat much nearer her knees. (cont)
You are a great talent,she is verry beautiful,love this pretty gown ,this red hair is pretty with her violett dress and the background is perfect ,great work falak:))))))))))))
@Cosmic, thank you for your wonderful comments. I'm really glad you like how it turned out.
@Belnika, thank you! And yes you can critique. I always welcome constructive critique as it helps me to learn and improve.
this is really cool! I love her dress - it's beautiful. I could offer a critique on this if you're interested, but I'm aways hesitant to do so without permission. Comment on my "check it out" contest to let me know. either way, I'll come back and leave a more detailed comment =)
fabulous too & I just love that punk rock choker!! xD It looks so cool against the dress & the swing s marvelous~!! I love her wings too!! I especially love that you covered up the bottom portion!! It looks really cool with just the top & that background is nothing short of magnificent!! I love all the colors!! It's seriously beautiful!! ;3; LOVE IT!! :D <333
I KNEW you'd be making some seriously AWESOME dolls once this game was finished & holy cannoli was I NOT disappointed!! Falak this is seriously GORGEOUS!! :OOO I am just in awe!! Especially over her dress, the pose, & the repo!! That repo is fantastic & the pose of her sitting on the swing is glorious~!! The dress is simply divine as well!! I love the style & the color!! & that shading!! Holy moly, that shading is seriously spectacular~!! The pattern & beading along the hem & the top is (c)
