A Poem I Wrote In My Sleep... ~ by SaralynArati

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Once again, Yellow, I'm so thrilled and flattered that you enjoy this!! Without a doubt, this is the best poem I've ever written while unconscious, lol!

5 years ago

Yellowauthor

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WOW!! I'd forgotten how magical, mysterious, and deep this is! And to think: You came up with this in your sleep?? Incredible!! Thank you for sharing! <3

5 years ago

SaralynArati

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Thanks so very much, ClockworkCoffee!! I'm flattered, and honored, both! I need to dust off my brain and write some more poetry!

7 years ago

ClockworkCoffee

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All crowns for originality - that's an incredible poem (especially from a dream!) and I love how you interpreted it with the doll - definite Labyrinthy vibes!

7 years ago

SaralynArati

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Many thanks, Aylatha!! I wanted to give the dress of the girl in the poem a simple, almost nightgown-like quality since I this came to me as a dream. :)

7 years ago

Aylatha

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What a lovely poem! And your doll is a nice illustration to it. I like how the ladies in the background are wearing masks as opposed to "you", and I like "your" dress and tiara-thingy.

7 years ago

SaralynArati

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Wow, thanks so much, Yellowauthor!! Maybe my subconscious was trying to tell me that I've neglected my poetry for too long. Let's hope so!

8 years ago

Yellowauthor

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This is so original!! WOW, I just love how deep and powerful this is! It's incredible that you wrote this in your sleep! O.o

8 years ago

SaralynArati

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Thanks so very much, pinky!!! Yes, I wrote that!!! I woke up with most of it already in my head, and rushed to write it down and fill it out a little. Nothing like that has ever happened to me before!

8 years ago

pinky10135

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Absolutely awe-inspiring! You WROTE that poem?!?

8 years ago