To Comfort the Bereaved ~ by SaralynArati

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Thanks tremendously, Nameless!!! I'm so thrilled that you like my characterization!! That's just about the nicest thing you can hear when you scribble words for fun or even profit. I truly appreciate the read!!!

9 years ago

The_Nameless

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The beauty of this doll is matched only by the intrigue of the story you told. Velen's cleric dressing is fantastic, and really does seem to fit the story. I love the runes that embroider his sash as well as on his belt. They hint at a rich and intriguing culture. The decoration at his neck is also intriguing. I think he's a very successful character. :) Catleya, is, of course, beautiful and sinister and perfect. <3

9 years ago

SaralynArati

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Thanks to both of you for reading and enjoying, launing and Viva-la-Luna!!! Be alert for future plot twists, lol!

9 years ago

launing

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^v^

9 years ago

Viva-la-Luna

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*stuffs popcorn into mouth*.....OOOOOOOHHHHHH NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

9 years ago

SaralynArati

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"Indeed," is Velen's only reply. Already he is thinking about Catleya de Seleni, about her next visit to this Temple, about perhaps speaking to her alone... for there are some sentiments one should not express in public. The flower has told him so much about her; she was not wearing her gloves when she selected that bloom from the bouquet to bring to Nocturnia. Lingering traces of her touch speak of a troubled mind, but thankfully not an insane one, as his own father's was for so long.

9 years ago

SaralynArati

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"Lovely, is she not?" asks Velen's mentor rhetorically. "So young to be such an accomplished horticulturalist. I believe that she learned the art from her father, as gardening is one of his most favored pastimes." "Yes, of course," Velen agrees, studying the flower which he now holds in his hands, "very beautiful. I believe she provided the floral arrangement for my own father's funeral." "Such a tragic loss for us all," intones the mentor. "A dark mage of great power and brilliance..."

9 years ago

SaralynArati

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Wow, thanks so, so much!!! I didn't really think I'd managed anything even half decent with him, so this is terrific news!! And yes, probably he is blinded, as is all too common... but we don't yet know his backstory or why he chose to become a Cleric. I'm still thinking about the possibilities...

9 years ago

Viva-la-Luna

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Your cleric looks WONDERFUL! His outfit is exactly befitting what the general garb of a Noxvelian would wear in that position, and he himself is very handsome~ Ah, the poor boy. He's too distracted by the flowers pretty petals to see the poison that lies within it....

9 years ago