Every night, I dream you're still here. A ghost by my side, so perfectly clear. ~ by 2BlueWizards

SaralynArati

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OMGorgeous, look at your wallpaper, even! Not to mention her perfect dress and hair, and him down to his cravat! <3

9 years ago

2BlueWizards

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Thanks! :D

9 years ago

silver_kitten

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I love both Sarah's and Jean Pierre's outfits!!!

9 years ago

2BlueWizards

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Yes! :D Even sometimes I try to connect characters from different worlds. I'm glad you like Sara; I feel like she's kind of a foil to Alinna. :)

9 years ago

LadyLeaf

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Oh Blue Wizard, everything is connected XD. All OCs are connected in certain degree unless they are in different worlds of course. I'm thirlled to have your approval. And I really love Sara, she's sweet but sad, I wish her to be the generation that is free from their past.

9 years ago

2BlueWizards

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Wow, that sounds great! I always love to connect seemingly unrelated characters in my stories and it seems you do too. :D And obviously you know this world better than I do so this would work out much better than anything I tried to come up with. Thanks for including my character in your story; I'm glad she's decent enough to include :)

9 years ago

LadyLeaf

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Then you have all those stories. Talbot on the other hand knew his wife gave birth to a child, and he was and still is in search for his daughter or at least the descendents of his daughter. I think I'll introduce Talbot a bit later in the story. Those are only initial idea, feel free to talk me what you think and any change, correction and modification are welcome. Thank you again for the interest in my story. :)

9 years ago

LadyLeaf

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Magdalena entrusted Sara to Asuriel, whom both she and Talbot gained acquaintance with. Sara was born a human with dormant Lytlhian genes, Asuriel cast the spell to suppress her Lylthian heritage. However, Sara's Lylthian features gradually unfolded as she grew up. Asuriel hid her identity because she doesn't want Sara to get invovled in all those messes of the war. She doesn't return Sara to her father because she wishes Sara to grow up as a human. But Asuriel cannot look after Sara forever...

9 years ago

2BlueWizards

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Oops, I didn't mean to make it sound like her parents were Lylthians. Sorry about that :). I actually had no idea who her parents would be, so that works perfectly! Those two OCs seem to fit as her parents :D

9 years ago

LadyLeaf

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I was thinking Sara's mother, Lady Magdalena, was a half Fae, the daughter of a Melusine and human. That explains her enchanting voice. Talbot and Megdalena had a consummated marriage. However, she was held hostage during the witch hunt aka a war waged by Yelaadim against others. I'm not very sure about the following part, these are the initial ideas. Magdalena was violated during her captivity, thus was pregnant. Believing the child to be Talbot's, she gave birth but died because of dystocia.

9 years ago

LadyLeaf

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Hey Blue Wizard, I was re-reading your update of Sara's story, it is fascinating! I love how you tied the fate of all your OCs together. However, there's one thing occured to me, you were saying Sara was born an Lylthian, no? Thinkling closely, Lylthians are sterile...so..unless she's a crossed blood? Then this idea suddenly came to me, would you mind making Sara the daughter of another of my OC, whom I haven't a chance to shed light on. Sir Talbot, the leader of Alinna's royal knights...

9 years ago

2BlueWizards

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Thank you so much, Leaf! Your approval means a lot. Yes, unfortunately I think they were "lost from the start" but that makes their story much more poignant. And yes, Asuriel may seem like a heartless, ruthless Yaldah but she's got a secret soft spot for her adopted daughter. :) I look forward to hearing whatever you have next for this incredible world!

9 years ago